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At the Beach by ~RubyJewelStone:iconRubyJewelStone:

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Submitted: March 29
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Here's a picture of a girl at the beach. I was feeling in a summery mood, especially since I'm in a city of everlasting summers (mostly).
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~incunography:iconincunography: Mar 30, 2008, 5:58:23 PM
Love the theme of it.
Beaches are always nice. o:

My only problem is the proportions of the background. The shadow is big which is causing it to kinda throw off the picture as a whole. If it was smaller or in a different place, the background wouldn't look just placed on there.

Other than that, I like it. :]
~RubyJewelStone:iconRubyJewelStone: Mar 30, 2008, 6:06:33 PM
Thanks for the comment. I certainly need to practice shadows, I had no clue where to put that that thing. I was trying to practice making a whole image instead of just cheating out of putting a background.

Thanks for the critique. :hug:

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*Muarw:iconMuarw: Mar 31, 2008, 11:10:57 PM
i like that you tried with a background. you could work with your shading and introducing highlights especially to show that the sun is shining on your character given that she's throwing off a long shadow. skin isnt just a single shade =)
anatomy wise it is really good

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~RubyJewelStone:iconRubyJewelStone: Apr 1, 2008, 4:52:04 PM
Yep, I could definitely stand to working on shading quite a bit.
And that shadow is kicking my butt.

That's a good point about the skin. The highlight are pretty inaccurate now that I think about it, since this is outside with the brightest light of them all. Furthermore, there's blushing and sunburn that I should probably be accounting for a bit.

Thankies for the critique! :heart:

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*SuicidaL-RaGe:iconSuicidaL-RaGe: Apr 2, 2008, 4:24:17 PM
brilliant work yus yus i love the anatomy and movement - the only thing i would have said has already been said - the lighting - as the sun is low in the sky as your shadow indicates there would be a more orange like glow yup yup

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*LadyDeddelit:iconLadyDeddelit: Apr 14, 2008, 4:17:39 PM
very pretty drawing and coloration :D

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